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I go to sleep to dream about you
I go to sleep to hide from the truth
I want to lock my pain out of my life
I lost myself between written lines

You go to sleep to forget about me
You go to sleep to hide from your fears
Inside of the cage you lost your own pulse
Inside of the dream you don't care about rules

We go to sleep to dream about us
We go to sleep to reach out for the stars
We go to sleep to never stop
We go to sleep just to wake up….
well yeah... I'm very used to of not sleeping so.... this is something what I'm thinking while trying to fall asleep. Apart from other different things ....


my life seems like one big dream and I can't wake up.
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Proventor Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
I don't really care about poems, but this, this is quite good :)
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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mailsprower1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
That's.. Just true.
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nod: thanks
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Iamhypocrite Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Уснуть и провалится в тот чудесный мир,что подсознание рисует, забыть про все,исчезнуть хоть на миг,уйти от повседневности в свою фантазию...

мини-экспромт

Красивое стихотворение))
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
вот потому я и люблю спать... не потому что я устаю, просто там мир по настоящему реален нежели той в котором я живу.
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:iconiamhypocrite:
Iamhypocrite Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
взаимно
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:iconking-doodles:
King-Doodles Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I used to be that first stanza. :P
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:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I still am :D
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:iconking-doodles:
King-Doodles Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too actually. I was in it, then left it, and now I've come back to it :P
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ah I see. well it happens
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King-Doodles Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup
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Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. I really like the idea for this piece, but feel like you could've added more and expanded on the reasons why you do those things while sleeping. Just a thought...great job though :)
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you.. Yeah I was thinking about that but that's the problem there no answer to these questions so I left it like this, I have other poems about dreams.. (I write a lot about it) and they're more explainable
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Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, so I guess I should check them out. However, I do think these questions do have answers, at least for myself. Maybe I'll write a poem about sleeping or dreaming...
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well yeah that's the point some of us do have answers some of us don't.. anyway thank you!
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Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem
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