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December 9, 2012
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The night has just began
And I am ready
Ready to blow up

My blood is throbbing in my veins
My body is dancing under pouring rain
My soul is singing, here we go again
And I am ready to feel pleasure in the pain

I'm gonna love you like the night loves day
I'm gonna kiss you like an arrow kisses prey
I'm gonna touch and mark you with my name
I'm gonna drink you and yes, our love is insane

Let's ride, I wanna be on top of the world
Let's ride, I want you, I wanna make love
Let's ride, I wanna be with you tonight
Let's ride, I want you as my darkest knight


My body gently whispers to your body
My hips move in rhythm with yours
Nothing matters and we need nobody
This night is ours, so let's everybody know
:iconsupergirlswag:
so...
let me know what you think about this
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:iconkillerlord123:
This is not my kind of poetry, but good job anyway. It was great to read it.
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:iconsupergirlswag:
well to be honest it's not my kind of poetry as well... but I felt like experimenting.
Thank you
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:iconkillerlord123:
Of course. We sometimes have to try new methods, new ways to do things. We can't be stuck in the same thing forever.
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:iconeverlasting90:
*Everlasting90 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sensual and tasteful!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thanks so much! glad you liked it!
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:iconc-allagash:
I love this kind of writing, and your piece is a very good representative of it.
Love the description, the rhymes, the whole work.

Congratulations for it, and thanks for sharing!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thanks ! Glad you like it cause I don't usually write something like that :D
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