Shop More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconsupergirlswag: More from SuperGirlSwag


Featured in Collections

Literature by WRITERandPOET

Poems and Haikus by MissAmaterasu18


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
January 11, 2012
File Size
730 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
199
Favourites
9 (who?)
Comments
11
×
Time to time I do believe
Time to time I start to live
But she has her own dreams
Her own sins, her own fears

Don't belong to me
Don't lie, don't pretend
It's ok
I understand

I needed time
You gave it to me
But it wasn't mine
And then you left

Misunderstood but well played
Fooled but still alive
All the pain that I gained
Made me fall apart

We tried, we tried so hard
To live, to share, to understand
But what a fail

Ruins that's what I see
Ruins that what's left to me

Forever gone, forever pain
tell me what you think..
cause I don't know what I was thinking when I was writing this
Add a Comment:
 
:icona7xfan666:
A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Amazing, Really good word flow=)
Reply
:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :)
Reply
:icona7xfan666:
A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012
Welcome=)
Reply
:iconpatmp:
patmp Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perhaps something is fighting inside you and is killing you, it feels so deep and painful..
Reply
:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
aha
Reply
:iconpatmp:
patmp Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
Reply
:iconpatmp:
patmp Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! But sad. Well done!
Reply
:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
Reply
:iconpatmp:
patmp Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;-)
Reply
:iconnekotelo:
NekoTelo Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Great like always..:).You're writing for ruins too! ^.^ :D
Reply
Add a Comment: