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I used to write so many things
I used to smile, I used to sing
I used to be so very happy
I used to be…
And then you trapped me

The piece of paper
On the table
A little story
Of a traitor

Written lines
On the purest heart
Written lines
To lie about

I was the paper
You were the words
You violate me
So I got lost

I am the memory
You are the ghost
I won't be treasuring
Not anymore

You inked the paper
You inked my soul
It won't get better
It won't let go

They will retell this story
The piece of paper gonna burn to ash
And we will shine in endless glory
But it will never heal this painful gash
paper...
thanks to :iconmaephotography2010: for the idea...


It kinda makes sense or not, well you decide
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:iconwolfofdesire:
Wow!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow: 
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SuperGirlSwag Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
hmm?
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:iconrikibose:
ah...entrapping...somehow, pulls you in, whether you're ready or not...just my first reaction :)
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SuperGirlSwag Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
ah ... got it :D thank you 
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AngelaJenkinson Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It makes perfect sense, yes!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
SuperGirlSwag Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconangelajenkinson:
AngelaJenkinson Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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CamCam-Plantagenet Mar 9, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent word usage. A truly touching piece, congratulations
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