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Baby, I slowly whisper
My lover of this night
My body shivers
And I know exactly why
You drive me crazy
But it feels perfectly fine

Candles are burning
And so am  I
I feel you closely
Easily losing my mind
You're moving so slowly
Making me go wild

Baby, I'm pleading
Gently kissing your lips
Whatever I'm feeling
I want more of this

I want you to be mine
Even if just for tonight

Naked desire of mine
Burning flesh of yours
Heart  instead of mind
Gain instead of loss

It feels good to love
It feels right in the core
I might have just sold my soul
But it was worth it after all
:iconsupergirlswag:
I wrote this few nights ago because of insomnia
Posting this through my phone cause pc died
Hope you'll like it
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:icongreenraingypsykinz52:
Very well written and absolutly beautiful!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thanks I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconcarletto47:
~carletto47 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it.Well written.
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thank you kindly!
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:iconcarletto47:
~carletto47 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome.
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:iconikelseyblaine:
Mood: Love ~iKelseyBlaine Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Okay, so, I'm like, obsessed with your writings. I can relate to them so well. Keep it up.
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:iconsupergirlswag:
aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my writings!
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:iconvalkaneer:
Mood: Joy ~Valkaneer Jan 21, 2013  Professional Writer
PC died! lol

Yeah, they do that often! ;P

Nice one, like all your work, doll!

;)
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:iconsupergirlswag:
Yeah imagine that
He's still dead though
Thanks, glad you liked it:)
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