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I won't let you see me crying
I won't let you see me dying

Nothing changed we are still the same
You know nothing except my name

The river is flowing and rain is falling
The sun is setting and I'm still drowning

In you…

But I won't let you see me crying
I won't let you see me smiling

Times are changing life is going
Rain is falling and I'm still drowning

In you…

No one's here, no one but me
I've cried all night so you wouldn't see

I died tonight and return as a ghost
To let you see what you have lost

You never saw me crying
You never saw me dying
You never saw me even smiling
You didn't see me at all
How I let myself fall in love

With you…
yes I'm posting a poem
and thanks to :iconanoukvandermeer: I can do it

this lovely girl checked my grammar so it should be no mistakes now :)
enjoy
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dkenreeks Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Very haunting--and very beautiful.
I'll fave this one.
--RKJ
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you sir :hug:
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Awesome :D
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you for your kind words!
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
You are very welcome c:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
This is beautiful and deep, my friend. Amazing, amazing piece.
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much!
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DinosurGirl Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Writer
i looove it!!
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!!!
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DinosurGirl Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Writer
welcome!!!!!
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