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No. No I'm not the person you love
Stop, just stop.
Stop saying these words
Stop getting into my soul
You won't find anything there, I am so cold
Damn and cursed living stone

No I'm not who you love
No, not even close
It's not me you're living for
Not me who gets into your soul
So stop before you get too far
Stop or you fall apart
I don't need you
Do you hear me?
I don't need your heart

No, this is just not right
Why you're here in the middle of the night?
Why you keep calling me the love of your life?
Oh God, this is too hard
Stop, you already gone too far
Just stop and live your own life
Don't go into the darkness instead of light
You deserve better I'm not the only one
You should be leaving, here comes the dawn

No. No need to feel love dart
Please, I'm begging you to stop
What have you done?
I was asking you to stop
It's too late, you're tearing apart
You're dying inside of my heart
It's over now, you didn't survive
You're getting cold just like I

No. I warned you but you didn't listen
You're sort of alive but your heart is missing …
:iconsupergirlswag:
wrote this with a flow... under impression of a song

it's sad I know it is.

this one without grammar check so I know probably there are mistakes (no need of saying it )

hope you like it
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
I could feel the song style too.
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:iconsupergirlswag:
yeah I guess it has it
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Try re-writing it that way.
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:iconsupergirlswag:
re write what exactly?
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
"I warned you". A blues or hard rock rhythm may be good. I wrote for them a few times.
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:iconnigmasin:
~NigmaSin Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just.... Amazing!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thank you so much!
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:iconcatgal15:
Exactly!! :love: I adore this!
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:iconsupergirlswag:
thanks so much!
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