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So here we are… on the edge of the earth falling apart
Holding hands together smiling to the rising sun
I hate to say it but it's time to say good bye

One day, one night I'll meet you again
On the edge of the earth I'll kiss you again
Believe me and have faith in our love
I'm giving you my heart in exchange of your soul
We are connected, we are meant to be
Through the eyes of a child world shall see
How I have loved you and how you loved me

Rise before you fall
Live before you die
Take before it's gone
Love before you cry

You said that to me and we fell apart, but nothing matters our love remains in time…

And here I am alone on the edge of the earth waiting for the sun to come up, I wait for you to join me, to hold my hand, to kiss me in the breaking dawn…
waiting is a torture
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a piece that seems to come more from the heart than from the tongue. Which is why, professionally speaking it lacks many of the forms and details that poets usually care for. Yet on the other hand it has a soft touch to it. It rings well with the feelings and if a bit childish; it still works. So good emotions :)
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
well I'm not a professional you know ;) thanks for your comment
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :)
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Beautifully written ^^ This is a gorgeous piece.
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks so much!!!
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patmp Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful! Well done! :)
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks Paty!
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patmp Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No prob dear! :)
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful as always. :) I swear your work just keeps getting better. :heart:
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks mu friend! means a lot to hear it from you :D
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