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I guess I loved you

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Published: Aug 22, 2013

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Looking back now I feel no regrets
I guess I loved you
It’s just impossible to forget
I guess I loved you
You know time does not mend
I guess I loved you
Every beginning has its end
I guess I loved you

I took first step to finally move forward
I guess you never loved me
Heart is pounding, veins are throbbing
I guess you never loved me
One last note that I’m still holding
I guess you never loved me
And I finish with myself being lonely
I guess you never loved me

Let these tears subside completely
I guess I loved you
Let me whisper this to you discreetly
I guess I loved you
And I will move away, believe me
I guess I loved you
Just one last kiss before it kills me
I guess… I guess I loved you

Wrote this in the early morning.... Not sure how I feel about this
Still have some old stuff but not sure if I'll post them, they suck.. This one suck too.

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justinpv225

Aug 22, 2013

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This poem shows something that almost everyone goes through at least once in their lifetime: heartbreak. This touching piece about a lover going through heartbreak relates to all of us deep down.
The repetition is well-used throughout the poem and it has wonderful rhythm. The visualization of the emotions that the speaker is going through is powerful and very relatable. This poem obviously had a lot of thought and emotional power put inside of it. The piece is also a perfect length; not too short, but it doesn't drag on like other poems I have seen. It is poetry perfected.

I guess I loved you

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