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Enough

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Enough tears
Enough crying
I've had too much
I've had enough

Too many sleepless nights
Too many miserable days
Too much of black and white
Too much of grieve and pain

Enough is enough
And that is where it ends
I wanna be myself
I wanna live again

I want to smile
And laugh like crazy
I want to cry
From being happy

I wanna colors back into my life
I've had enough of black and white
I just want to live and breathe and feel
I want to be alive again, I just want to be me
I haven't upload poems cause I was writing complete bullshit. This is an attempt of positive writing... Fuck I really suck at it. I generally suck at writing so yeah... I don't even know
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Michel here for #poeticalcondition. I promise to be fair.
The most outstanding aspect of the poem is the structure/form. The use of repetitions, specifically. This was certainly intended for effect.Be certain that the effect will come across, because it did for me I could feel your emotion, perhaps contempt or disgust, judging from the first two stanzas, but certainly not delight.Stanza three is the most evident expression, plainly. From there onward, the reader should understand where you stand. I will not rattle on about diction, since this poem expresses best in spoken language. That is simpler. Well-done. Keep writing. Cheers.