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Hi lovelies!!!
How you been? I hope good
I've been ...weird. But stable :lol: I suppose

So, here's the deal... I want to challenge myself with your help of course. 
I seem to be struggling with my inner poet and writing right now feels forced 
I feel the urge to write but everything seems wrong. Like I can't get the right words... I bet fellow writers know what I'm talking about 
Anyway, back to the main topic
I'd like to ask you to comment and write any word that comes to your mind... I need like 10 words from 10 fellow deviants so I could try and write 10 poems. 
I hope you'll help me out and this will help me with my little struggle 

Wishing you safe holidays, lotsa joy, happiness and smiles !!! :heart:
SGS 
How come you're not crying
Not grieving but smiling
How come you're not mourning
Not fighting not even trying

How come I'm still breathing
Still standing with no heart
Is it not over?
Am I still alive?

This is a decease
Heartless body
Rotten to the core
Bloody hands clutching love
Trying to save the last drops
How come?
Wind is still blowing
Rain is still falling
Fire is still roaring
Earth is shattering, throbbing

The pain is no longer a pleasure
It's gone
Failed to satisfy
So what now?
We just cry?
We just let ourselves cry?
Saying good byes
Saying lies

How come?
How come?
Sooo, the writer in me is begging for release .... 

Have no idea what's this all about 
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I feel like talking to the mirror
Crying my heart out
Smashing the said mirror
Letting it all out

I feel like drinking vodka
Getting my head pound
Then getting something stronger
And then another round

I feel like dancing on the roof
Dancing with my demons
Screaming I loved you
Screaming in between us

I feel like loving you
Gently with no pressure
And here's to me being doomed
Here's to you being a treasure

I'm talking with the mirror
Smashing glass with words
Getting to the terror
Of living in my world
Mirror
Another poem in pretty short time

Like good all times

Hmm, do you talk to the mirrors?
I used to. When I couldn't see my reflection just a blur of mixed colors (thanks for that to my diseased eyes, a certain bright side)
Sometimes I'm too ashamed to look at my reflection... 
Sometimes I wish mirror would show me the image I really want to see...
Sometimes mirrors make me guilty ....
Sometimes they make everything too hard to carry
Sometimes I just want to break the mirror hoping I will never see the  reflection again....
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to forget
to drown
to let go
to hold on
I wanna die
cause I said so

to pull the trigger
to laugh into death face
I'm not suicidal
Just disgraced
Forgive me for all this
I'm really sorry
but it fits

to understand
to support
to give comfort
to not let go
and no, don't let me go
but please no pep talks
just let me cry
let me get off
I just wanna find something to live for


no help
no advise
I'm on my own with this fight
it's fine I can handle it
with my own fucking ways
either ending or continue it
but it'll be me and only me who's gonna be facing this
On my own (terms)
wish people would stop telling me what to do 
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SuperGirlSwag
Ivanka
Artist | Hobbyist | Photography
Ukraine
B.I.T.C.H - Beautiful Individual That Creates Hell
Hi lovelies!!!
How you been? I hope good
I've been ...weird. But stable :lol: I suppose

So, here's the deal... I want to challenge myself with your help of course. 
I seem to be struggling with my inner poet and writing right now feels forced 
I feel the urge to write but everything seems wrong. Like I can't get the right words... I bet fellow writers know what I'm talking about 
Anyway, back to the main topic
I'd like to ask you to comment and write any word that comes to your mind... I need like 10 words from 10 fellow deviants so I could try and write 10 poems. 
I hope you'll help me out and this will help me with my little struggle 

Wishing you safe holidays, lotsa joy, happiness and smiles !!! :heart:
SGS 

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Thank you for the favorite!-Chrissy
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Great gallery.  Thank you for the fav. :heart:
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Thanks for adding my poem "Seashell" to your favorites! :-D
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welcome!!! 
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thank you for the fav, I'm glad you like it! :D
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KuraisInspiration Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks for the fav, it's much appreciated~ ^^ (I also never knew B.I.T.C.H could be "Beautiful Individual That Creates Hell". I love it XD)
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totally welcome :D 
well, we learn new things everyday :D Glad I could be useful 
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Hooray~ ^^
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